Okay, the tickle is getting to me.

I think I have decided on a plan of action. I'm going to start with the last version I sent to my editor contact. From that I will add the plot elements that she wanted. But try to keep it in the same voice as the original work. Comparing the earlier versions to the recent stuff, the voice is what seems to be the biggest contrast.

Yeah, it seems I screwed up the one thing the editor really told me she liked.

That's the plan. We'll see how much I get done over the holiday weekend. I hope a lot, but honey-do came home this weekend.

Call if you miss me!!!