It seems that my brain wasn't fully in gear when I cranked out the last bit of Godred. I finally hit on all the things I wanted to *happen* in the opening scene, but I wrote it in 3rd person, and it came out totally flat. *wah!*

So today I sat down and rewrote it in 1st person, and it is finally getting closer to being *right*. To me, at least. I didn't take the time to count words, but I had 84 lines, handwritten.

I have to do some homework for class tomorrow, so I can't push onward for now, but tomorrow after class--look out!